I have posted this essay (with permission) to encourage you to provide us feedback -- and that includes copyediting. Style is important to us. Substance too. Creative writing that combines style and substance can be very effective and its often provided by writers who are good story tellers. That's powerful KT. Sometimes plain good writing can be just as compelling. So . . . go ahead correct our errors, suggest ways and means to present our material, tell us a story and be a critic. We love it. Thanks.